Assignment 2

Think of three street names. Examples might include Grove, Forest and Maple.

Now, use those street names as last names for characters in a vignette. Give each character traits that are clearly from the street name.

You have 200 words. Submit your exercise in the comments to this post. My vignette will be there shortly.

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2 Responses to Assignment 2

  1. jeff says:

    My street names are: Brentwood Drive, Sparrow Lane and Foley Beach Road.

    When Brentwood thundered past her to answer the door at the estate, Molly Foley Beach barely looked up from her magazine.

    She recognized the voice of the visitor and further buried her face in the latest issue of Cosmo.

    “Is Ms. Molly here,” asked Barry Sparrow. His small frame and high voice seemed to get lost in Brentwood the butler’s massive frame.

    “I’ll inform her that you have arrived,” said Brentwood.

    Before the butler could say a word, Molly said, “I know he’s here. And I KNOW he’s going to marry me. But it’s not my choice and today I don’t want to see him.”

    She closed her magazine and turned away from Brentwood who solemnly went back to the open front door.

    “I’m sorry sir. Ms. Foley Beach is indisposed. You’ll have to call on her at a later date.”

    Brentwood then shut the door with a thud and Barry flitted away to the yellow scooter parked on the cobblestone drive.

  2. Clownface says:

    I’ve chosen the names of city squares, rather than streets: Porter, Ball and Union. And, I worked for an hour on this and couldn’t get it below 221 words. I humbly present 247.

    The inflatable raft was surrounded by a flotilla of human goods ejected from the cruise ship as it sank. Richard Porter gathered as much as he could, plucking recognizable items from among the bits disappearing into the ocean’s oily maw. He donned the dress hat of a senior crew member that bobbed past, feeling comforted by the uniform.

    There were 17 other scared people in the life raft. Sarah Union, a bailiff in the 4th District Court of the State of Montana, tried her best to project an aura of calm. On the first day of the cruise, she had taken a tour of the ship led by a junior deck officer where she learned the safety features of the floating hotel. She thought to herself, “The raft can support us for at least four days. But, some people need to feel like they are doing something.” She called out, “Who can help Porter?”

    Satisfied with the four pairs of hands now busily sorting in the waters that surrounded them, she turned her attention to Howard Ball. The most popular of the 3,000 passengers on the ship, he told interesting stories, and was always game to try the activities presented each day. Alone on the cruise, he always had several offers to join other travelers for dinner. He was the life of the party. She caught his eye, and nodded. Ball, understanding his role, immediately launched into a story that diverted the attentions of the other survivors.

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